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Once upon a time there lived Ivan in Africa.

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  1. Ivan was a huge man, who had got a big family. He realy loved his wife Tessa, but Tessa was very small woman with red hair. There were 12 children in family, it was very friendly family. They lived in small village near desert. Trere wasnt any school in that village. So Ivan wanted to move in big city, in order to give his children better education, because in they village there werent any people who could read.
    Angelina Martianova

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    1. Sory,l make a mistake in last sentence
      So Ivan wanted to move in big city, in order to give his children better education, bacause there werent any people who could read in they village.

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    2. ... it was A very friendly family.
      They lived in A small village near THE desert. THERE wasnt any school in that village. So Ivan wanted to move in A big city, in order to give his children better education, because in THEIR village there werent any people who could read.

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  2. So, for three months, Ivan and his family moved to America. There they bought a large and seemingly beautiful house, but ghosts lived there. Ivan's family did not know this. The children immediately liked him. But two weeks later, the guys and their parents began to notice different oddities, for example, the youngest daughter aria lost her favorite doll, and her mother lost a red coat.

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    1. The children immediately liked IT.
      ...the youngest daughter Aria lost her favorite doll, and her mother lost a red coat.

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  3. later strange things didn't stop.One of the daughters walked around the house and decided to look at old books on the shelf. When suddenly the shelf with girl turned over into another secret room.Girl passed out.
    Garayutina Nastya

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    1. later strange things didn't stop HAPPENING .
      One of the daughters walked around the house and decided to look at THE old books on the shelf.

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  4. When she got up. She saw white squares. She was really surprised. She decided to open one of them. It was pictures. There were around 100 pictures in this room. She wanted to tell other about this. But how to go away from this room?
    Baraban Gleb

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    1. When she got up, she saw THE white squares.
      THERE WERE THE pictures IN THEM, ABOUT 100 pictures. She wanted to tell EVERYTHING about this. But SHE DID NOT KNOW how to go away from this room?

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  5. What does it mean?She began to look throught this pictures and touched them.When she touched one of each pictures,it was turning into alive portraits which moved,gived a winks,smiled and made fanny faces.Beсause all was so unreal,her head began spinning and then she fainted.

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    1. What DID it mean? She began to look throught this pictures and touched them. After she HAD touched one of each pictures,it turnED into AN alive portrait which moved,GAVE a winks,smiled and made fUnny faces.Beсause all was so unreal,her head began spinning and then she fainted.

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  6. When she woke up,a strange man stood near her. He was translucent and looked at her. And all the pictures frozed. Strange man was looking at her few seconds an then said loudly:

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    1. When she woke up,a strange man stood NEXT TO her. He was translucent and lookING at her. And all pictures frozed. THE Strange man HAD BEEN looking at her FOR few seconds anD then said loudly:

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  7. - What is your name?
    -My name is Mary?- she said
    -Help me get up- Mary said hesitantly
    -I see you are good girl.I will help you, but you mustn't tell someone about it- said strange man
    Then he cast a spell, and girl became in her house. She kept her promise and didn’t tell anyone about it.
    Basko Elena

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    1. -Help me TO get up- Mary said hesitantly
      -I see you are A good girl.I will help you, but you mustn't tell ANYone about it- said strange man
      Then he cast a spell, and girl FOUND HERSELF in her house.

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  8. She was tormented by her mind. It was early 5 o’clock and she hadn’t already sleep. Mary go to the bathroom. She had felling that someone was behind her back... SCREAM. BY GOSH! It was her brother Tom. He went to the kitchen for stilling the cake for Maries birthday party
    -What are you doing Tom? Why you don’t sleep?
    -I...
    -Ok,listen.I promise don’t say about it to him but...
    -Who is he??...

    Masha Korbut

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    1. Mary WENT to the bathroom.
      She had A felling that someone was behind her back...
      He went to the kitchen TO STEAL the cake for Maries birthday party
      -What are you doing Tom? Why don’t YOU sleep?
      -I...
      -Ok,listen.I HAD PROMISED HIM NOT TO SPEAK about it but...

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  9. Этот комментарий был удален администратором блога.

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    1. THE Strange man SUDDENLY appeared suddenly told THEM:

      Then Mary disappeared with this ghost. Tom fell asleep. When he woke up he DIDn't remember his sister Mary. THE whole family didn't remember her too...

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  10. Dear guys, your story is a kind of exciting ones, but.....it should be continued :^)))

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